Archive for December, 2009

5 Afghan Notes

Wednesday, December 23rd, 2009

1. The operation is likely to be tedious and unpleasant for the military because not only is this operation going to be speedy, causing pressure on time, but the atmosphere of the landlocked country which includes not up to date and barely working public works, surely doesn’t help.

2. The POTUS clearly says that the withdrawal of troops is “conditions based”. Although he promises to begin pulling the forces out, if it all depend on the conditions, then we might in fact never fully pull the forces out and be stuck there. Somehow the wording given seems to try to cover up the fact that the US simply does not really have a plan to pull troops out successfully.

3. The advantages include the fact that the set date may pursue people to rap up in Afgan and get out, considering there is almost no time. It may even say that setting a date and announcing it publicly tells people Obama is not lying and he really means it. The disadvantages, are that time could put pressure on people which makes them work less efficiently, and thus making the operation a failure.

4. The time is so short because Obama thinks Americans are getting weary of the chances of war and more devastating things causing an effect on our lives. With this weary it makes people less believe in Obama’s plan to success and with these ideas in peoples head, they will not want or either not believe in Obama thus causing ideas of rebellion. Consequently, the list is continues.

5. Obama states so little about Karzai because everyone knows he is corrupt and America does not want to seem as if their partnering with an incapable and unreliable leader who represents their country.

A Seperate Peace Essay Outline

Wednesday, December 23rd, 2009

INTRO: Innocence in children results from the blank state that they are born into. From the moment of their conception, however, children begin to acquire knowledge through experience. With this new knowledge, a child will begin to see the world differently, more clearly. This gradual acquisition of knowledge results in a marked change in the child, for a loss of innocence matches perfectly the gain in clarity.

THESIS: In John Knowles A Separate Peace, the knowledge that Gene Forrester acquires replaces his innocence, thus changing him in such a way so as to make him better suited to live in the harsh reality called life.

TOPIC SENTENCE: Gene’s initial blank state slowly fills to ultimately allow him to live within society.

SUB1: Initially, Gene is innocent due to his lack of experience in the real world.

QUOTES:

“of what peace was like, we boys of sixteen. We registered with no draft board, we had taken no physical examinations. We were carefree and wild, and I suppose we could be thought of as a sign of the life the war was being fought to preserve.”(Knowles 24).

“The next morning I saw dawn for the first time.” (Knowles 49)

SUB2: As time progresses Gene gains more experience allowing him to see the evils in reality.

QUOTES:

“But by now I no longer needed this vivid false identity; now I was acquiring, I felt, a sense for my own real authority and worth, I had had many new experiences and I was growing up”( Knowles 156).

“I did not cry then or ever about Finny.…I could not escape a felling that this was my own funeral, and you do not cry in that case” (Knowles 194).

Costs of Reality

Wednesday, December 23rd, 2009

Innocence in children results from the blank state that they are born into. From the moment of their conception, however, children begin to acquire knowledge through experience. With this new knowledge, a child will begin to see the world differently, more clearly. This gradual acquisition of knowledge results in a marked change in the child, for a loss of innocence matches perfectly the gain in clarity. In John Knowles A Separate Peace, the knowledge that Gene Forrester acquires replaces his innocence, thus changing him to make him better suited to live in the harsh reality of life.

Gene’s initial blank state slowly fills to ultimately allow him to live within society. Initially, Gene is innocent due to his lack of experience in the real world. A Separate Peace is set against the backdrop of World War II which causes destruction and chaos to arise. The actions taken in war have regrettable consequences. Gene and the other students at the school do not even understand the war. Their innocence shelters away the evils in war, not allowing them to understand the difference between war and “what peace was like[..] [They] registered with no draft board, [they] had taken no physical examinations. [They] were carefree and wild, and […] could be thought of as a sign of the life the war was being fought to preserve”(Knowles 24). Because Devon students are kids, they cannot even begin to imagine what war truly is, for they are innocent. Children live life carelessly and wildly with no fears and no understanding of consequences. Boys of sixteen such as Gene, Brinker, Finny and Lep are full of life and think about the present rather that the future. This innocence clouds any understanding of the depth of war from their minds. The fact that they are kids explains their untroubled and careless lives, which is due to their innocence. Another indication of Gene’s innocence occurs when Gene and Finny bike to the beach, take a swim, take a walk and end the day with a good nights rest upon the sandy shore of the beach. Finny informs Gene of his secret that he is his best friend, and would not have taken anyone else that day to have fun except his best pal Gene. With these final words the two boys go to sleep. Gene wakes up to find Finny still sleeping and sees “dawn for the first time” (Knowles 49). Gene sees the sun rise for the very first time. The sunrise is the beginning of everything. The sunrise symbolizes a beginning of a journey that Gene must go on, a journey which results in the loss of his innocence and his ultimate change. As time progresses Gene gains more experience allowing him to see the evils in reality. Throughout the entire novel Gene seeks his true identity. At some points he attempts to copy others and at other points he slowly establishes his own. Finally, Gene “no longer [needs] this vivid false identity; now [he] was acquiring, [he] felt, a sense for [his] own real authority and worth, [he] had had many new experiences and [he] was growing up”( Knowles 156). Gene grows up due to new experiences. He gets a sense of his own identity by taking authority and not being the one controlled over anymore thus coming at the cost of innocence. Through his loss of innocence, he slowly begins to change and establish his own identity. Gene’s innocence and its ultimate death parallels closely his relationship with Finny, who is a symbol of innocence. Finny proves that when innocent, one only thinks about the good in life and ignores the negatives and evils in reality. From ignoring the harsh reality of war to ignoring the truth about Gene purposely jouncing the limb, Finny truly is innocent. Gene never cried about Finny, even when he “stood watching him being lowered into his family’s strait-laced burial ground outside of Boston. [Gene] could not escape a feeling that this was [his] own funeral, and you do not cry in that case.”(Knowles 194). Because Gene feels that Finny’s funeral is his own, he is actually metaphorically speaking of the death of his own innocence, thus ending the journey he began when he saw the dawn for the first time.

As he begins his term at Devon, Gene has no concept of war or even dawn. Slowly, experience begins to replace Gene’s innocence, finally ending in his loss of innocence, as shown by his feelings towards Finny’s funeral.